The following issues are present in the SAO process (8.7.2):
1.) in "8.7.2 Sample adaptive offset process"

• the coding treeblock location ( 0, 0 ) and the largest CU location ( 0, 0 ) are redundant

2.) in "8.7.2.1 Modification process for sample adaptive offset"

• again (rx,ry) and (x0,y0) are redundant
• largest CUs should be CTBs
• largest coding unit should be CTB
• "saoWidthInCTB" should be "saoWidthInCTBs", same for Height
• variable saoDepth not defined here

3.) in "8.7.2.1.1 Modification process for luma and chroma samples"

• again xC,yC and rx, ry are redundant
• saoTypeIdx 1-4

o edgeIdx derivation in 2. and 3. can be combined
o loop over CTB samples i.j is missing in 1.-3. (edgeIdx derivation)
o loop over component k is missing in 3. (boundary handling)
o in 2. (edgeIdx derivation), edgeIdx can only take the values 0, 2 and 4 since Sign(x) returns just 1 and -1.
o in 4. (no SAO for PCM…) edgeTable not needed

• saoTypeIdx 5

o repeated comma after otherwise
o 1. and 2. can be combined to "1. The variable bandShift is derived as follows…"

• saoTypeIdx 0 case can be combined with PCM/QP_Y=0 because they all do not apply SAO

4.) In general the process names/headings can be changed to be more meaningful and "8.7.2.1 Modification process for sample adaptive offset" and "8.7.2.1.1 Modification process for luma and chroma samples" can be combined since the first just loops over all CTBs for one color component.